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Like trying to manage five husbands

  • Jan. 15th, 2009 at 4:56 PM
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I think I'd rather do that than write a book with more than one main character.

First and foremost, if you know of a great book with multiple protagonists, PLEASE LIST IT!

I'm revising a manuscript for a fellowship application. I love the book, but it's a challenge, because for what I wanted to accomplish, I ended up with six five protagonists (I killed one yesterday -- hoping to murder another one tomorrow.)

I'm reading like mad. When I first outlined the novel, I read The Joy Luck Club, The First Wives' Club, and Sisterhood of the Traveling Pants.

They did not help.

Recently, Donald Maas, in his book Writing the Breakout Novel, insisted that the only way to make a multiple-protagonist novel work is to ensure that the group is paramount. It must become a character of its own, with hopes, goals, obstacles, and a story arc.

Well, okay. I think I mostly did that, but early reviews of the opening chapters from the critique buddies were overwhelming with -- you can't switch characters NOW! I just got into the story!

So I've been a Google-Maniac, looking for other multi-protag books. I have found:

How to Make an American Quilt by Whitney Otto
Babyville by Jane Green
The Poisonwood Bible by Barbara Kingsolver
The Stand by Stephen King
Jurassic Park by Michael Crichton

I have the last three on my shelves. I'm going to start outlining them tonight, and try to find the other two tomorrow. In my Google-mania, I found an AWESOME and lengthy set of blog posts on pitfalls of writing this type of book at Anne Mini's site.

But I'd love to have more to look at. I don't think the thriller/action books are going to help me. Mine is more women's fiction.

If you know some--bring it on!

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[info]juliakarr wrote:
Jan. 15th, 2009 11:26 pm (UTC)
LOL! Your headline sucked me in! I can't even find one husband to manage! I am sorry - I can think of no multiple protagonist books - except maybe "More Than Human" by Theodore Sturgeon - in which the MC is actually six extraordinary people who come together and act as one. It's a pretty fascinating book (written in 1953) - if you're into sci-fi at all, you'd probably find it interesting & it is multiple characters acting as one.
[info]mtb0001 wrote:
Jan. 15th, 2009 11:37 pm (UTC)
I just read "This Charming Man" by Marian Keyes. I'm sure you can find a synopsis on Amazon, but basically it's got sections devoted to four different women who were involved with the same man. They come together at the end, of course. If you want to borrow it, just say the word.
[info]deannaroy wrote:
Jan. 15th, 2009 11:42 pm (UTC)
WORD!

How can this be accomplished? Some clever smart writer girrrls are meeting for Happy Hour next Thursday if you want to come along. Otherwise, we can make a date.
[info]mtb0001 wrote:
Jan. 15th, 2009 11:59 pm (UTC)
I'm currently waiting to hear when my mom is going to be in town (my birthday's Tues. but I'd rather spend it w/R and Obama), so I probably can't commit to Thurs. What's your daytime schedule like? I'm currently down to one project so could probably run it to you during the day. We're at 45th/Red River, but I'm mobile.
[info]mtb0001 wrote:
Jan. 16th, 2009 01:25 am (UTC)
Alternatively, I could ask R to drop the book off at Austin Java if you'll be there on Mon. I have rehearsal in Pflugerville from 7 to 10 that night, but it would almost be on his way home from work.
[info]deannaroy wrote:
Jan. 16th, 2009 09:36 pm (UTC)
We'd love to see him at Java!
[info]mtb0001 wrote:
Jan. 17th, 2009 06:39 pm (UTC)
Will work on it -- what time are you normally there by? Drop me a line at marianne at illuin dot org.
[info]writerjenn wrote:
Jan. 16th, 2009 12:54 am (UTC)
Amy Tan has written that she considered The Joy Luck Club to be connected short stories, not a novel. That may be why it didn't help!
[info]deannaroy wrote:
Jan. 16th, 2009 01:29 am (UTC)
And interestingly, I found it to have the most arc, the group acting as one to ready the daughter to meet her abandoned sisters. Hmmm.
[info]shanasilver wrote:
Jan. 16th, 2009 02:41 am (UTC)
The Luxe series by Anna Godbersen has 5 narrators. Two of them are more prominent than others, but they all have their own story arcs.

I'll try to think of more...
[info]christine444 wrote:
Jan. 16th, 2009 05:39 am (UTC)
The Elm Creek Quilt series by Jennifer Chiaverini is about a group of women quilters. Each chapter usually has a different main character.
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